September 26, 2012 by heavenhappens

Paperboat

In a sea of ink

I sail to Oblivion

on a paper boat

Inspired by the haiku heights September challenge. Today’s word is Paperboat.

8 thoughts on “Paperboat”

magicalmysticalteacher | September 27, 2012 at 12:03 am

That paper boat is carrying a lot of freight!

Paper Boat

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- heavenhappens | September 27, 2012 at 9:14 am
  
  You are right there!
  
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Patti | September 26, 2012 at 7:15 pm

That’s one of my favorite journeys, but I always want to come back.

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- heavenhappens | September 26, 2012 at 8:18 pm
  
  ha ha x Not that sort of oblivion!
  
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readinpleasure | September 26, 2012 at 2:24 pm

This is so poignant and haunting. Evocative and very well written

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- heavenhappens | September 26, 2012 at 8:17 pm
  
  Thanks x I woke up early this morning and it just came to me. It reflects the fact that I write reams and reams of stuff which is never going to be read by anyone ~ hence the oblivion ~ and the paperboat seems so fragile in the inky sea ~ like my life really!
  
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dulcinaandgnome | September 26, 2012 at 10:40 am

“sea of ink”… it suggests so many things to me: words are gone from the paper tinting the sea; no words, no memories, oblivion…
Wonderful! One of the best haiku today in my humble opinion.

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- heavenhappens | September 27, 2012 at 9:19 am
  
  Thank you so much x
  
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