January 18, 2014 by heavenhappens

Sharp ~ Haiku

Inspired by haiku-heights.blogspot.com prompt word ‘Sharp’

Sharp satire portrays
In deftly drawn doodles
Truths keenly observed
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Look sharp for the train
The city is awaiting
A day out with friends
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Sharp pain reminds me
Body’s borne on broken bones
Injured and aching
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19 thoughts on “Sharp ~ Haiku”

Laurie Kazmierczak | January 24, 2014 at 1:27 am

Your words flow smoothly for such a jagged subject♪ Well done! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/look-sharp/

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- heavenhappens | January 24, 2014 at 1:28 am
  
  Thank you x
  
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heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 11:09 pm

Thanks !

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CuriositytotheMax | January 21, 2014 at 6:13 pm

3 such different interpretations of the prompt – really enjoyed each.

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 6:27 pm
  
  Thank you x
  
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toadslayer | January 21, 2014 at 5:15 pm

Nicely done. I like that you were able to draw on several interpretations of the prompt.

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 5:41 pm
  
  Thank you! I would love to know the backstory of your blog’s name ~ toadslayer??
  
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Rallentanda | January 21, 2014 at 5:49 am

I like the last one because I can identify with it at the moment:)

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 8:49 am
  
  Oh no you poor thing x hope you will feel better soon!
  
  Sent by Brenda Kimmins
  
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reshmaharish | January 21, 2014 at 3:35 am

Sharp observations Brenda, hope you are back on your feet 🙂

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 9:06 am
  
  I’m getting there thanks x out of the wheelchair now and hobbling but on the mend x
  
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readinpleasure | January 20, 2014 at 5:35 pm

Very nicely done!

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 9:02 am
  
  Thanks x lovely to hear from you again. Being off my feet for a while has given me great opportunity to catch up with reading the blogs I love x Every cloud has a silver lining as they say!
  
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Apurva | January 20, 2014 at 5:35 pm

lovely!!! I loved them all 🙂 good work
apurvakj.wordpress.com

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 9:03 am
  
  Thank you x written straight from the heart in the last one!
  
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Kalpana Solsi | January 20, 2014 at 4:35 pm

A lovely bouquet of sharp haiku.

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 9:03 am
  
  Thank you, what a lovely comment!
  
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Anthony North | January 20, 2014 at 3:59 pm

Enjoyed your trio. The first, especially.

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- heavenhappens | January 21, 2014 at 9:07 am
  
  Ah that is kind, I value your comment Anthony as I’ve enjoyed your blog for quite some time now x
  
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