Inspired by haiku-heights.blogspot.com prompt word ‘Sharp’
Sharp satire portrays
In deftly drawn doodles
Truths keenly observed
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Look sharp for the train
The city is awaiting
A day out with friends
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Sharp pain reminds me
Body’s borne on broken bones
Injured and aching
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Heavenhappens 
Your words flow smoothly for such a jagged subject♪ Well done! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/look-sharp/
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Thank you x
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Thanks !
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3 such different interpretations of the prompt – really enjoyed each.
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Thank you x
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Nicely done. I like that you were able to draw on several interpretations of the prompt.
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Thank you! I would love to know the backstory of your blog’s name ~ toadslayer??
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I like the last one because I can identify with it at the moment:)
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Oh no you poor thing x hope you will feel better soon!
Sent by Brenda Kimmins
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Sharp observations Brenda, hope you are back on your feet 🙂
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I’m getting there thanks x out of the wheelchair now and hobbling but on the mend x
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Very nicely done!
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Thanks x lovely to hear from you again. Being off my feet for a while has given me great opportunity to catch up with reading the blogs I love x Every cloud has a silver lining as they say!
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lovely!!! I loved them all 🙂 good work
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Thank you x written straight from the heart in the last one!
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A lovely bouquet of sharp haiku.
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Thank you, what a lovely comment!
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Enjoyed your trio. The first, especially.
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Ah that is kind, I value your comment Anthony as I’ve enjoyed your blog for quite some time now x
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