April 23, 2013 by heavenhappens

Tsunami-Haiku

Tectonic trauma

Silently the sea retreats

tempest to unleash

6 thoughts on “Tsunami-Haiku”

Nanka | April 23, 2013 at 7:25 pm

I can see it rising and coming!! Well thought!!

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- heavenhappens | April 24, 2013 at 3:59 pm
  
  Thank you x Fortunately we don’t suffer from Tsunamis here but they must be dreadful to see.
  
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Maggie | April 23, 2013 at 6:20 pm

Wow. Tectonic trauma indeed…followed by tsunami at some point. Powerful haiku.

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- heavenhappens | April 24, 2013 at 3:58 pm
  
  Thank you x I was horrified by the Sumatran Tsunami and this inspired this haiku.
  
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readinpleasure | April 23, 2013 at 6:07 pm

Quite frightening and well written 🙂

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- heavenhappens | April 24, 2013 at 3:47 pm
  
  Yes, it was a bit unnerving being in the cathedral late at night when all the lights were out. We just had the stage lighting on for rehearsals so the rest of the cathedral had a haunting quality about it.
  
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