I was in hospital at the weekend having an operation on my foot. The pain is indescribable but at least it helped me to write a haiku inspired by this week’s Haiku Heights’ prompt word “Grimace”.
Humour held hostage
In agony arrested
Face frozen in pain
~~~
Features contorted
Awakened in agony
Pain surges through me
Heavenhappens 
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Will do thanks x
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I wish you a speedy recovery sending you hugs and positive vibes
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Thank you x I am feeling much better this week x
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Glad to hear that =)
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Xx
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you are better already ! 🙂
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Getting there slowly thanks! Nice to meet you.
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get up ,stand up …lets rock ,no time to waste 🙂
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So sorry for your pain, but the resulting Haiku is splendid♪ http://lauriekazmierczak.com/transformation/
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Oh thank you x that’s a lovely comment!
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Get well soon Brenda, your pain flowed in the Haiku
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Thanks x I am slowly mending x it’s lovely to have time for my blog though!
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Heal well Brenda, your pain came through for us
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Thank you x
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..wonderful line..”Humour held hostage”..loved the pair of Haiku 🙂
N.B. This is the first time I’m visiting your blog. It seems from the other comments that you’re not well these days. Get well soon , prayers for your speedy recovery :-)..
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Thanks for the comment x I am usually fit as a fiddle but needed an operation on my foot which is now mending. Very painful but will be great in a few weeks x thanks for prayers! X
Sent by Brenda Kimmins
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🙂 stay well
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You poor thing. I hope your surgery went well and you have a rapid recovery. You made some good poems from the pain.
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Thanks Alice x
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I can empathise with your vivid description. Best wishes for a speedy recovery. Marie.
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Thanks Marie x
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Ouch – sounds like you can look forward to only grimacing – get better soon!
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Cheers x
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The pain comes through in the haiku. Nicely done. Hope you’re feeling better.
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It does indeed- every experience adds to our creativity!! Bit better today thanks x
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Very impressive! The first one is unique.
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Ah thanks x written with heartfelt emotion!
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both haiku are lovely…hope the pain eases soon… 🙂
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Me too x
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Both well done. i like the first one a bit more, due to the vivid images. Excellent! Feel better!
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Thanks x yes I like the first one- written with feeling!!
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Ow Brenda, hope you get well soon and up on your foot. Wonderfully written. 🙂
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Thanks x from the heart!
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Hope you fell better soon and those grimaces become grins!
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Thank you x
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Aww.. Hope u get well soon.. by d haiku is wondrful
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Thanks for reading x
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Hope you are feeling better!
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